cykotiq's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Love Egg ep.3]

Almost 10

The graphics, sounds, animation and storyline are great, if not perfect, not to mention the originality! But the preloader sound... AARGH driving me nuts! Anyway, great job!

[Blondes do it better]

Z-movie or not...

The movie was cool, the story was minimal but okay, graphics are great, but Z-movie or not, you *really* need some sounds man! So what if the filesize is 500k instead of 115... Anyway, good job, throuw in some sounds and you've got a winner.

[NG Gives You Wings]

Okay, now sing with me!

It's senseless, whee, yeah, so senseless, whoo, aight! Or, analytically speaking: the graphics are okay, voices are easy but good, animation is weak, the story doesn't make any sense.

[Help]

Muffle muffle digi-muffle...

The movie was cool, it was pretty humorous, the only thing that bothered me was the digitized voices. They were nearly inaudible, especially because of the weak normalization of the voices and the heli. Maybe you'd better add subtitles, of actually fill the text bubbles with the actual text. About those bubbles, by the way, they look a bit amateurish. Next time you might try to give the sticks a mouth. The story was okay, the graphics were pretty cool for sticks.

[Me vs Slime]

Too bad

Your artistic talents show off in the drawing style, up to the point where you decided to spraypaint the slime all over the screen in a hurried way. Take a bit more time for your next movie, I feel that you took your time to start this and rushed through it towards the end after that.

MYLO-9000 responds:

Thanks for you honest review of my toon, and you are right. I did start out slowly but then rushed the end. i'll try to make my next toon more consistent. thanks

[The stick man's wish]

I'm ashamed to admit it: LOL

It wasn't too great but worth the save point. The graphics may suck, big time, but the music was okay and the story in my line of humour. So, although the movie sucks, it's granted a 2/5 score.

[PacMan Extreme Grindage]

It's bitching time

I don't find a yellow ball on a red carpet very extreme... It was way too short to be interesting, besides I've seen too many movies like this by now. Make it longer, or even interactive. And if you feel you should use sound, at least use something in style. And what about the SFX? Anyway, I know I might sound like a bitch... Well, that's life.

[trrorois out from hiding]

The talent is there

I loved the graphics, they were in a funny comic cartoon style. The sounds were in order as well. As far as the story goes, well, it seemed a bit uninventive to me. Not because it's short, which isn't bad by default, but there's too little happening, and that what IS happening, is uncreative and not surprising. If you think of a better story you'll be able to score a big flashy hit.

[mmm NINJA]

Oh no, it's the homosexual ninja!

I like the animations, a lot, although the ninja walks like a fag. Other than that, this movie is way too short to score very high. Use your animating skills for something bigger and better. Use some sounds and music (more than you did now anyway), and a background is pretty essential for a good movie as well. Just some thoughts...

[Paper Animation]

LOL, what kinda school are you in?

It looks artsy, there's even some kind of story added to this! I like it, can't say a lot more about it actually!

maximus-prime responds:

tnx,

I study Communication&Multimedia Design, so for webdesign and stuff we learn flash. But I like animation so I already knew a little flash.